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~You gate crashed my brain and seeped out through my pen~
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~You gate crashed my brain and seeped out through my pen~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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You drift in and out at times not desired As you gate crash my brain when I'm feeling so tired You make up the words and they spin in and out Please not at this moment, I'm wanting to shout I'm trying to sleep, but you always interrupt The sleep pattern of my brain you try to corrupt So I jump out of bed and write down whats in my head Cause you've gate crashed my brain and seeped out through my pen And my sleepless night is about to begin  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
creative. interesting how you refer to it as 'gate-crashing'. now let me take a wild guess, that would mean your new ideas are, perhaps, crashing through your gate of slumber and seeping out of your pen? correct me if im wrong. i do that too, and lose plenty of sleep at that! at first i was thinking it was some guy calling you late at night. i dunno, either way u got me thinking |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wonderful Tracie...glad Im not the only one... Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Well said, tracie! I experience this all the time. Darn Muse keeps me going and I write some classics in my head tossing and turning, not being able to sleep. Then, when I go to write it down.... poof! Gone, like vapor! Your poem seems to say that you are able to capture the Muse and write it down. Ah... to be so lucky! Enjoyed this poem, tracie. I have one on the same subject. I think I'll repost it.  dp |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ I enjoyed this. Just welcome them in and let the muse begin. With great amusing I welcome the intrusion of thoughts cascading into the slumber of my night. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A great response by all and I thank everyone for their replies  Eagle scorpion you were right the first time ~~ CM thanks ~~ Doreen I don't always get it down in time but when I do I'm greatful ~~ Marge my wonderful friend thankyou for reading and enjoying as you know I always appreciate your replies Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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