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Open Poetry #6

*Forgive Me*

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-03-10 11:50 PM

Soft lunar apparitions
Flutter on the midnight fabric
Of iced emotion
A drifter's voice lingers
Upon the haze of grey
Whispers not quite heard
And tears silently fallen
Gently fade away.

Forgive me, my love
When the fiery tides sweep
And shadow demons engulf
I yearn with my shattered soul
To return to your embrace
For your smile melts
The horizon of my frozen dreams
And offers solace from this place.

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

Dusk Treader

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since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

1 posted 2000-03-11 12:38 PM

Another excellent poem Krista, your ability is astounding. Bravo yet again

Now where's Jeffy when ya need him...?

Abrahm Simons

Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

2 posted 2000-03-11 05:26 PM

Krista,

I don't know how you do it... how do you find so much emotion to put into your poetry? It is so wonderful. Keep up your wonderful work, and I look forward to seeing a lot more.

Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
Cassie

Astraea
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California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

3 posted 2000-03-11 05:28 PM

As a forever fan of your work, Alwye, this is another shining example of your work and talent. Lovely poem.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-03-11 05:32 PM

Krista~
This is a fine work of emotion.

'Soft lunar apparitions
Flutter on the midnight fabric
Of iced emotion'

Simply lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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