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Wet Once Again
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Wet Once Again |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
The waves wash over me Whispers in my ear Haunting melody A song I've come to fear Pulls me down below Drowns me in its tears Tells me where to go But I just stay right here And my soul cries out in pain Grips me endlessly Then darkness comes with rain Come to carry me And I would fall from grace If they would let me be In the waves I see your face Looking back at me |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is very powerful, JML. J have felt the same way many a time myself. Thanks for sharing. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Intriguing title...don't know if this applies, but once when someone asked me why I was standing in the rain, I replied, "I was BORN wet." Now the visual of that remark may be disgusting to you, but there is a deeper wisdom there, and you have put it much more nicely, I might add. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Intriguing title ..oh yes...and the word intrigue seems to come up a lot...  as wound up as you were today...I was almost afraid to read this LOL..... And my soul cries out in pain Grips me endlessly Then darkness comes with rain Come to carry me And I would fall from grace If they would let me be In the waves I see your face Looking back at me very powerful poem... stalking you still, jm |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ anything to do with the ocean gets me. This is wonderful.-SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank ya'll very, very much. Its nice to know others like to get wet sometimes too. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes, this poem does intrigue, it twists and turns, taking the reader with it! Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A very intriguing piece of poetry. Anything about the sea draws my interest  |
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