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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Every I love you Is like the petal of a flower Caressing the skin on my cheek Soft and warm Fragrant and colorful It lingers on my mind And leaves its imprint on my heart Every smile Is like an unspoken bond Between not only friends, but lovers Quiet and delicate Strong and knowing It hovers in my ears And stays in my heart Every loving touch Is like a kiss between us Fingers lingering here and there Firm and yielding Comforting and loving They leave their prints on my skin And their trails on my soul. ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Big freakin' sigh.....  yeah, you're way too mushy for me right now! hehe Sorry, but this mushy stuff just doesn't cut it right now, ya know? LOL I guess it's great if you're in love! Congrats on having your neck in the noose.....er....I mean....congrats on being in love! ROFLMAO Ah come on - I gotta give SOMEONE a hard time! Sheesh.....  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, such a romantic piece. I'm sure your "true" maiden must appreciate your talents. Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-09-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, this is a beautifully written romantic poem. You capture the essence of love's effect so well with your words. Sigh, I wish that I could feel love the way you have expressed it. Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ahhhhhhh....you are amazing and so is your effect on my heart. You could melt all the ice in Alaska with your work!! I loved it!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's like a beautiful poem written from the hand of a poet in love.... good poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"Its Like"...perfect poerty...thats what!!! sigh...very sweet Sven..as always... jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sven, what a sweet soul you are! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Poet Sven~ You've caressed a lot of hearts with words from your own. Exquisite. For the first time, I wish Ron had sound on here so you could hear the *sighs*. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow. . . I'm just a bit speechless. . . I wish that I could hear all of the "sighs" too. . . I just don't know what to say. . .you're all so wonderful. . .thank you. . . your words mean a lot. . . ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sven, astounding, you are the king with this one. Parker |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sven, very sweet, very beautiful. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow!I loved it a lot.: |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
sigh |
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