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Right And Wrong and not quite poetry
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Right And Wrong and not quite poetry |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
As always... in rough draft form... Right and Wrong and not quite poetry 9/12/99 The world in which we live surrounded by our souls Perceiving eachother as right or wrong rather than good or confused Confusion being neither good nor bad but definetly not positive an ailment of sorts Our souls specifically telling us what is right Our mind's dissecting the information until it is wrong Bringing chaos and confusion to our humble lives Confusing good for evil and evil as good Back and forth until our over-all perception of all things is confused Upsetting the subtle balance between right and wrong good and bad... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi MyPenNameIsSam, WOW this is so true in life we do this to our selves loosing all clear thought, I think it's because we don't want to up set the people in our lives. Very insightful poem, Thank you, Cerenity |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Aaahhh....tis true! We spend so much of our time pointing fingers and judging, that we lose sight of the good in ourselves and others! We do tend to take something small and twist it in such a way, we create a monster! LOL Very interesting concept you have here Sam! Thanks for sharing! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very interesting poem-- |
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