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| Open Poetry #6 |
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I'll do anything/I'm sorry |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I hope y'll enjoy it. I'm trying to carry on life without you but, it's hard to do. I can't and I won't accept the fact that I'm not yours because you was my sweetheart and more. Just the thought of another man holding and kissing you makes me lose my cool. Baby, I'm sorry for cheating on you because now I realize that no woman could love me like you do. And I'll do anything for you because I deeply adore you. I'm sorry for what I've done because the pain weighs one-hundred tons. I beleve that it's not to late for me to enter your gate. If only there was something that I could do to reassure you that I won't hurt you anymore because I'm not the same man as before. Can't you tell that I'm sorry? Can't you tell by the sad look in my eyes and I assure you that they tell no lies. Please forgive me and relieve me from all this pain and grief. because I am deeply sorry. Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely written expression of your grief...I hope for the best for you Nate...keep trying. James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate~ I sense the pain of regret in this. When trust is breeched ... it's so difficult to convince someone of your sorrow, for they have a sorrow of their own. Hope things work out for the best. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sometimes saying sorry isn't enough, YOUR ACTIONS along with words will show how sincere you are, only time can heal hurt and pain...I have been hurt by this and it has took years to get over, I have a hard time trusting others because of this pain and hurt that I didn't ask for but had to deal with it anyway! hope all goes well.... "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your pain is evident in this one. I hope that you are able to overcome the mistakes of your past to go on with your future. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I'm glad that everyone appreciated it because I wanted to put as much soul in it as I could. Thanks again for the comments. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nate, this is fantastic! Packed with emotion! Very very well done! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nate, There is nothing wrong with this style Nice poem. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Seymore. I really needed to hear that. Nathan |
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