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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
The red light is on , but the power is down . i re-try the switch , and i give it a little frown... ...still nothing , so i revert to silence , the only thing i hear is my own sobbing nonsense , and in the back of my mind the words... ..."one day" but for now ill keep those words at bay. The sky is blue , but its getting dark . and now the dog , begins to bark . Im all by myself , im all alone so i let out a littlie moan The words "4 REAL" carved into my arm, i have been caused so much harm . I lay on my bed and begin to cry i always end up aking myself why why me , what have i done ? where is this "black hole sun"?. im ready now take me to bed all this mess up inside my head . if only the power was on.... |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
very original poem!, nice work |
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PREACH Junior Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 20 |
I see a lot of ways to look at this poem. Can you explain it a little for me please? |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
thankyou mystery . PREACH , id be glad to . well...actually i cant think of a specific meaning . i wrote it tonight (tues)after some emotional strife . the fist verse is kind of me thinking about my stereo not working and i suppose my own energy and the rest was what i had been doing and thinking . you can look at it any way you like , thats the beauty of poetry thankyou for reading. ill look out for you. [This message has been edited by infinat3 sadn3ss (edited 03-08-2000).] |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
**Cabes, I can't decide what to do...I want to scream, I want to cry, I want to tell everyone to go **** themselves... This poem is like you wrote it FOR me....I have so much love and respect for you that I don't know what to do with it...I just hope I'm showing you some of it... All my love.....< !signature--> I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. [This message has been edited by mete out (edited 03-08-2000).] |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
hi folks, im not being cheeky , i just thought i would put this back to the top , cos i want people to give me their opinions thanks |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
Up to the top we go... Hold on tight! I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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