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Open Poetry #6

Of chaos and guilt

Tan
New Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2000-03-07 03:38 AM

In this constant chaos forms a light
But even too much light is blinding to the eye
As beauty can be a deceiving sight
So can welcome clothe scorn and spite

In this everlasting guilt smiles a name
Its worth more then earth, life and breath
Radiant, silent and won't harm for pain
For you can't cheat love and you can't cheat death

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-03-07 04:57 AM

Amen. Short, strong and to the point! Well done and well said.

Michael

Enola
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 138
England

2 posted 2000-03-07 09:26 AM

I agree with Michael. I hope I get to see more of this, it's a breath of fresh air.

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

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