Open Poetry #6 |
Passion (Not Stute Related) |
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Passion I saw the magnitude of ocean strength raging in your eyes as the mellow moon above was full of life and illuminating the fragile sandy earth below our captured embrace. I wanted to body surf your highest crashing tides and tangle within your strands of seaweed. I caressed your smooth sandbar softly as your waves gently rode over me. I now lay upon your sandy bed as the rush of your ocean undertows my emotions to extreme levels of passion. |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
I love the way the ocean feels too. "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nurse C~ This is LOVELY ... and the title is certainly apropos. The format is WONDERFUL ! By golly, I think I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Nice waves here Nurse C... nothing like the passion of the sea... a depth and intensity beyond measure. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this passions very easily! This is very beautiful! Denise |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I thank all of you for reading and responding, the ocean is captivating in itself. |
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Rapunsel New Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 9 |
Passion...one of my favorite subjects |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Rapunsel, Thanks for reading and responding, and I know about your passion...LOL |
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