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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 2000-03-06 02:03 PM


Close Enough

Sitting in the crowded audience
close enough
to grab a distant glimpse.

They slowly came on center stage
close enough
to desire as they creatively disengage.

Ten gorgeous men performing
close enough
to have this mind transforming.

Women drooling falling at their feet
close enough
to reach out and carefully greet.

Lusting eyes accompanying mine
close enough
to gather together and entwine.

The guy's are done show's over
close enough
to luck as a four leaf clover.



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-06-2000).]

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Mike
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1 posted 2000-03-06 02:18 PM


Is that supposed to be luck or pluck in the last line?    sorry.. delete...delete...
Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 2000-03-06 02:22 PM


Mike, ROTFLMAO I like your concept, but I think I'll stay with luck. Thanks for reading.
Marilyn
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3 posted 2000-03-06 04:41 PM


oh I like pluck better myself!! Whoo Hoo!! Good work Nurse.  
Nurse Crachet
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4 posted 2000-03-06 04:48 PM


Marilyn, I truly do too, but I think I'd have a hard time finding myself again if it were to go that far, with that many...LOL
Thanks for reading and enjoying.

Denise
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5 posted 2000-03-06 08:12 PM


This is great! Those four leaf clovers are very rare indeed, aren't they?!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-03-06 09:10 PM


ROFL@ Mike's comment. Hey Mike, what's ya doing here anyway. It said for ladies only  

This is cute Nurse Cratchet...I kind of like the pluck in there too. Good poem  

Nurse Crachet
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7 posted 2000-03-07 07:35 AM


dsnyder, Thanks for reading and your kind response

Hoot_owl_rn, Thanks for reading, glad you liked it, and I think Mike may have been reading and responding as I was editing the title to say for ladies only.

Sorry Mike, but you actually made the poem more fun for that I say Thanks again.

Wicked Witch of the East
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8 posted 2000-03-07 03:42 PM


Nurse Cratchet my pretty, I hear Mike's on the loose,
I'll call out my monkeys, they'll cook his lame goose,
He ought not be readin', poems for ladies,
We'll send his tail end, straight down to Hades,
Into this poem, he ought not to have ducked,
Before said and done, he'll wish he'd been plucked.


Nurse Crachet
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9 posted 2000-03-08 09:04 AM


Well Witchy poo,
Mike was no problem
he added humor to the scene
so you leave him alone
you hear.
I thought the Witch
of the East was the nice one
now which one of us
is mixed up?

Wicked Witch of the East
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10 posted 2000-03-08 09:28 AM


You think of my sister, she comes from the west,
But just so's no question, I am the best,
For Glenda's a prude, she calls me a prune,
Mom liked her best, she's just a buffoon.

Nurse Crachet
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11 posted 2000-03-08 11:04 AM


I need to say sorry
for being mistaken
both the Witches
from the East and West
are mean.
please forgive
this crazy nurse
sometimes she has not
all her faculties.

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