Open Poetry #6 |
Love without thought. |
fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Uplift me you said and I took you in my arms and we did the dance of love. Inspire me you said and I sang my song of love to you till tears streamed down your cheeks Elate me you said and with a flourish I handed you a single white rose Move me you cried and I wrote a sonnet of such boundless devotion you had no words to express your joy Change me you said and I looked at you, and would change nothing Please me you smiled and I took your hand in mine and caressed each finger with my lips Love me you whispered and without a moments hesitation, I did. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Fool, Love. Such complete,beautiful love. This is wonderful!! -SEA |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Yes, who could possibly ask for more? This poem says and gives it all! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Hey fool...sorry couldn't resist....this is beautiful! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Kyttn Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 10MO |
Aww, how sweet. Very well written. |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Good Job Fool Sweet with a bit of humor. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey fool love me without a moments hesitation. Very fine. You did a good job on this one. James |
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