Open Poetry #6 |
Tis but a Dream |
Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Tis but a Dream In the solitude of my lonely nights I dream of thy embrace. If only I could tell thee how I long for thy touch once more But alas another has stolen thine heart. As I stand in the shadows of your mind my love, can you not hear the beat of mine heart as it slowly fades into a distant sound? As my mind recalls the alluring aroma of thy silken body and how it excited the longings which I had guarded so closely within mine heart for so long, mine heart weeps for once again my completeness is of naught. Thy beauty pure and gentle still whispers unto my soul liken unto a nightingale's sweet song. Tenderly loving you in my loneliness my every thought is of thee my love. Know ye not my queen a love like ours has no end? Momentarily lost in a lonely poet's illusion I cry out "Why has love dealt with this knight so cruelly?" But once again dawn softly appears and as I awaken you are lying in a sweet peaceful slumber 'tis but a dream. I shall cherish thee eternally my love, for without thee my world would be of naught. Written by Loneheart Loneheart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneHeart~ Simply beautiful as are all your pieces. I visited your web page and found much to enjoy. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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busylisa_ca Junior Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 39 |
Loneheart, Just a beautiful poem. Absence makes the heart grow fonder! Keep your hopes up your queen will return! From busylisa |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This is my stlye of romantic poetry! I was scared for a minute, for I thought I was reading one of my own! Loved it! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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jazzgal Junior Member
since 2000-03-07
Posts 37 |
Are you a knight with chivalry still branded on your chest? I love it! It truly shows your heart. Now I'm eager to find your previous poems... |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Beautiful romance here, Loneheart. A smile from me on this morning. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Line after line of beautiful romantic thoughts. James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so very lovely! Denise |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Beautiful my friend. Oh....um btw... I am in need of a king I am a tiny little thing with very long red hair, cute as a button I am!!! ha ha smile Raven |
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