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Loneheart
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since 1999-09-13
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0 posted 2000-03-05 07:27 PM


Tis but a Dream
In the solitude of my lonely nights I dream of thy embrace.
If only I could tell thee how I long for thy touch once more
But alas another has stolen thine heart.
As I stand in the shadows of your mind my love,
can you not hear the beat of mine heart
as it slowly fades into a distant sound?
As my mind recalls the alluring aroma of thy silken body
and how it excited the longings which
I had guarded so closely within mine heart for so long,
mine heart weeps for once again my completeness is of naught.
Thy beauty pure and gentle still whispers unto my soul
liken unto a nightingale's sweet song.
Tenderly loving you in my loneliness
my every thought is of thee my love.
Know ye not my queen a love like ours has no end?
Momentarily lost in a lonely poet's illusion
I cry out "Why has love dealt with this knight so cruelly?"
But once again dawn softly appears and as I awaken
you are lying in a sweet peaceful slumber 'tis but a dream.
I shall cherish thee eternally my love,
for without thee my world would be of naught.
Written by Loneheart



 Loneheart

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-03-05 08:26 PM


LoneHeart~
Simply beautiful as are all your pieces.
I visited your web page and found much
to enjoy.
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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busylisa_ca
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 39

2 posted 2000-03-05 09:32 PM


Loneheart,

Just a beautiful poem.  Absence makes the heart grow fonder!  Keep your hopes up your queen will return!

From busylisa

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-03-10 02:08 AM


This is my stlye of romantic poetry! I was scared for a minute, for I thought I was reading one of my own! Loved it!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


jazzgal
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 37

4 posted 2000-03-10 02:18 AM


Are you a knight with chivalry still branded on your chest?  I love it!  It truly shows your heart.  Now I'm eager to find your previous poems...
sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
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North Carolina
5 posted 2000-03-11 07:06 AM


Beautiful romance here, Loneheart.  A smile from me on this morning.  

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-03-18 07:40 PM


Line after line of beautiful romantic thoughts.   James
Denise
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7 posted 2000-03-18 09:16 PM


This is so very lovely!  

Denise

Ravenlearns2fly
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 71

8 posted 2000-03-18 11:35 PM


Beautiful my friend.

Oh....um btw... I am in need of a king I am a tiny little thing with very long red hair, cute as a button I am!!! ha ha smile
Raven

 

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