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Open Poetry #6

Morning Walk

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

0 posted 2000-03-05 02:01 AM

As we walk down
the sidewalk of
this small souther town
we notice
two old men
sipping coffee
quietly
on the front porch
of a hardware store.

I gently nudge Renee
as we walk by...
"That'll be me
in a few years"

One of the men
politley places his
index finger to the front
of the bill of his
battered old John Deere cap
"Morning ma'am"
to my wife.

she gently nudges me...
"No, you could never be so polite"

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-03-05 03:08 AM

ChrisG~
LOL ! And tell me ..
does she have you pegged right?
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

2 posted 2000-03-05 03:10 AM

LOL I 'm afraid she may ma'am...Im afraid she may....lol

Chris

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-03-05 08:24 AM

ROFL....love it!!!

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-03-05 11:54 AM

Wonderful, Chris!

~ Claire

**so good to see you posting...missed your work

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-03-05 11:58 AM

Delightful, Chris!

Denise

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

6 posted 2000-03-05 10:39 PM

Thanks everyone....and Claire...Im glad to be back.

Thanks

Chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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