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A Tear Fell
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A Tear Fell |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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A Tear Fell < !signature-->~*Marge Tindal*~  I shed a tear today Silently, I felt it fall You caught it shared it held it felt it then suddenly it wasn't so big after all ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-05-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow! This is lovely, Marge! Corinne |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wonderful as always Marge. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nice one Marge(y) *Twinkle*  K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ What a delight you are. Thank you for liking this little piece. ChrisG~ I'm glad you found it wonderful. Kamla~ And YOU, young lady ... Love seeing you here. ~*Marge(y) ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And you, my dear, have caught a few of mine This is wonderful! Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How sweet, you seem to catch many of our tears |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this Marge...good image... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ If I could but place my arms around you and just squeeze you with a hug ...  I hope I hug you with what I write .. Hoot~ If I can catch the tear of a friend ... I've only paid back those who have caught and held mine. This is just the way I feel about sharing and caring. I did and I do. PoetdeVine~ Thank you for your welcomed comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, this is a short and perfect poem. I loved it. Did you write this specifically for a friend of yours? If so, you certainly have a great friend. Whenever I shed tears beside one of my friends, I will always think of your poem. Beautiful! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This says it all, Marge! Beautiful poem, beautiful presentation! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you for always liking what I write. My heart dictates the thoughts. Sometimes they are for me ... sometimes just there to be said for someone else. I've had friends who have caught my tears and shared my sorrow. The greatest gift I can return is to hold the tears of someone else. I'm glad you will remember these simple lines the next time a friend needs you or you need a friend. No poet could ask for more. Thank you again. Denise~ Thank you, my friend. I'm so pleased that it has pleased you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And within this tear I see a gem. *L* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh gosh, I wish I could have said what Sy said...so perfect..this is lovely. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ What a wonderful thing to have you say. Thank you, my friend. Martie~ Well, thank you for letting me know that you think it ! (wouldn't we all like to say some of the wonderful things he says?) It counts the same ! I'm glad you like it, Martie~. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marge, i read this at the latest issue of DP and was so blown and awed by it..... i love it i love it i love it i love it.... i only wish that i have been inspired to write this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ I do so appreciate you taking a moment to let me know that you were moved by this little piece. I feel that tears are meant to be shared - and in doing so - we dilute the sorrow. Tears of joy are often the result of someone caring enough to hold our tears in times of sorrow. *Hugs* to you for your thoughtfulness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know what you mean..lovely..James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Thank you. Sharing is so necessary. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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