Open Poetry #6 |
Hail In A New Day |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
The sun is begging to rise, I hear the birds many and different. The chilled air hits my flesh but is confronting. An announcement is being hailed, a new day has arrived go be well and thrive. Nature has the secrets to life no doomed songs do birds sing no flower does open because of fear. But man has not learned this trait of nature yet, they go about hurring and blind passing the chance to say I love you to there mate, or give a greeting of well being to there neighbor. They proceed through the day with no song for life, no joy to be alive, no-announcement they our truly blessed. The sun does set and there is promise of a repeat tomorrow. But does man learn life's true rhythms, no for he does not listen to the very nature of life which is so bountiful all around him. Is there going to always be a promise of a new day? Cerenity |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, "man has not learned this trait yet", Hopefull we will before there is not tomorrow. Insightful poem, Cerenity-1. Beautifully done. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I like, like, like this. Such beautiful imagery you've cast at my feet. 'Is there going to always be a promise of a new day?' I can truly tell you .... YES ! The new day promise rises on the rays of the sun. Bringing awareness of peace-in-the-making for us all. Birds singing, breezes rustling the underbrush, flowers bursting forth in new bloom. Nature at her finest teaches us things we could not otherwise know. We do need to only listen and model ourselves after her. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
I liked it..deep feelings hello darkness my old friend |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"No flower does open because of fear". This is an excellent line and the poem is full of them. Well done! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree, Cerenity! This is wonderful! I love it!! Chock full of wisdom!! Denise |
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