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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
You are my Father Why do you do this? I am your daughter. Is something amiss? You touch me not as a Father should I want to tell someone If only I could If I tell I'll lose my family If I do not It'll stay with me You say you love me yet I know better. You have now placed on me a scarlet letter. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Chic As promised I have checked out some more of your work....this is what I came across. I am so sorry. You are on the floor and you obviously need picking up. You are, to a certaiin extent, doing this yourself by expressing yourself in your poems. Keep on writing and keep on fighting. Feel free to mail me if you want to keep in touch. Love Louise xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
 This is sad and well written chic. Feel better... I would take the path of telling others if I were you, but that is only the way I think. You see the situation in a way I can not. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The piece is good but the content is sad and bothersome I must say. Don't see how you can continue in that environment. Hope there is someone that you can talk to about this and get help. Don't understand why you would lose your family if this is not revealed. There must be love there somewhere. Hope it works out. If you want an e-mail friend, count me in. Good luck. |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
mete out-thanx for ur support  i'll take u up on that e-mail offer if that's ok mistikman- though u are far away, you are a good friend thanxdanny- i just feel as though if I tell what's going on...my family will seperate and I don't want that. I'm bascially torn to pieces with this. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
um....thank god (why?) i have never been in that position . i know it may not help but i am truly sorry . you are very brave to alloow your poetry to be viewed and you have my upmost respect . thankyou very much . |
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