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Open Poetry #6

Where Time Stops

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-02-09 02:24 PM

I'm passionate
I feel just as well as any
If better
Emotions run so STRONG through my veins
Pumping blood and tears
Fueling my fire
Urging on my passion
I am passionate
Feeling,
Emotional,
Alive!
Living dramaticly in a moment
Where time wraps itself around me
And I stop breathing
Just living that moment
Like it was the end
Or
Begining
Of my life

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

1 posted 2000-02-09 02:31 PM

Lovely words, beautiful verse.

--Kess

Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...

--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-02-09 03:39 PM

I think you have defined passion and intensity in one brief poem. WELL DONE!
Lucky be the person who can share time and passion with you!
Danny

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

3 posted 2000-02-10 04:54 AM

and boy have you said it LoL and quite wonderfully!

Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

4 posted 2000-02-11 04:47 PM

Wonderfully put! To live in a moment where time seems to stand still, bravo!

It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley

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