Open Poetry #6 |
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Senryu: Wisdom |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA ![]() |
Senryu (Sen-ree-yoo) is a three-lined unrhymed Japanese poetic form structurally similar to the Haiku, but dealing with human rather than physical nature, usually in an ironic or satirical vein. Senryu 5-7-5 A thousand mistakes is but life's education along wisdom's way Melissa Honeybee ![]() |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Oops....if I had read 5-7-5 first I would had known what Senryu meant. Anyway, I like these short poems. Such wisdom to behold. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Melissa, This is great, I'll have to try this. Parker |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...so very true ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much, Danny, Haleyja and Hoot! ![]() As always Danny thanks so much for your kind words and support. Haleyja you too write excellent haikus and senryus, I have enjoyed yours. You are very creative Hoot If ever you write haikus or senryus, please share them with us, you are such an amazing poet, I am sure that they will be perfect coming from you. Take care, Melissa Honeybee ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Perfect execution and words, Melissa. |
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