Open Poetry #6 |
Waterfall Of Lust |
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Waterfall Of Lust So I now slowly retreat from the closed door of desire yet nothing seems to be able to extinguish this fire. Crayons in sixty-four colors dissolving before me, wax burning with intense desire for only thee. The wax master alive with his creativity molding his scenes in sensitivity as my desire tries to flee. My hands held out in sorrow for my weakness a vision of a rainbow dancing within me, the tears of rain a waterfall of lust given for a colorful personality that without even a touch ignited the flames of my desire. |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
im ready to color!! very good poem |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like this as well. and the structure too. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
eyesplus2, Thank you for reading and replying Danny Holloway, Thank you kindly |
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