Open Poetry #6 |
Hero's tale |
angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Hero's Tale The definition of a hero, or of corse a heroine, is someone brave, meticulous, with will of strong, and youth of face . Of course we've all heard songs of these, the stories long and twisted, but in the end, all is well and good, happyness prevails . What is true, but never told, is of all the other heros, the ones just like you and me, who fight, and fall, and fail . These my friend are real lords, the world owes them some songs, for ones of new and ones of old, i show my humble gratitude . If you find it difficult, and if life's an up-hill struggle, then you to, my friend, and fight, even just a little . God made all men equal, No ? About as equal as waves, some rise up above the rest, and others are branded naves, so if you get an easy ride, a hero you are not, we all must fight an honest life, and listen not to crooks, who talk of men of steel, with hearts of shining gold, cause these my friend had easy rides, now that they can't appeal, they are woken and disturbed, by tales and by songs, i am glad i'm not a hero, just strong, and brave my song . Meticulous and youth of face, i just hope that there is a way, that we can all hold on . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Excellent and honest, as always. You have an admirable stlye and eloquence. How does it feel to be a hero? |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
we are the true heros 'eh bake , well you keep fighting because one day , all knaves turn into knights . cabe |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks to you both, some of us are more heroic than others, only don't know it, I am still waiting to see some more of your wonderful poetry . And if knaves turn into Knights, then if all is equal and all knights fight true, then the people that put in the most effort must some day become kings . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
As ever, you speak volumes to me. Cabes was right, you WILL have your day. Nice one... I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks very much mete out, I am flattered that someone thinks the same sort of way as me, let alone 3 of you, I will try to look for your poems . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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