Open Poetry #6 |
A New Friend |
jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Write me a poem, he says Let me know what you feel But where should I start And will he take it for real? He's sweet and he's warm He's kind and he's true It's so easy to say I've found a new friend in you. He smiles at my humour He frowns when I'm sad Sends red roses to cheer me From the week that I've had. Now the housework's forgotten And the dogs feel ignored But without him on-line I'm incredibly bored. We spend hours chatting About the thoughts in our head And I hate to tell him That it's time for my bed. He knows all my secrets Shares my hopes and my fears Has it been just a short time? Feels like I've known you for years. He knows just what to say To put a smile on my face Wants so much to meet me But has respect for my haste. He's honest and patient Wont push me too fast And I've got to admit I hope this friendship will last. ~Julie~ All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins. [This message has been edited by jascanvey (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Julie, Its very nice to make friendships online. This is a wonderful poem. I hope it lasts. We all need to make good friendships. Online distance means nothing. Parker |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
James - thanks for popping in! He liked the poem too! Sometimes it's nice to chat to a stranger about your hopes and fears. This was just a little ditty to let him know I appreciate it! All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Julie, this is really sweet and from the heart. How could he not like it? I just hope it lasts a long time for you too |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
YAY JULIE!!!! *HUGZ* IS THIS THAT GUY THAT SAID HE WANTED TO MEET YOU OF ICQ??? COOL GOOD LUCK GIRL AND ITS A GOOD POEM |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Julie! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Excellent writing here. I can relate to this one as Im sure many others online can. Meeting someone online gives both parties a chance to get to know eachother in a much different way than you were to meet in a bar or else where. Thank you for the read....NOW GO PLAY WITH YOUR DOGS j/k [This message has been edited by RufffRyder (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a nice poem from your heart. Yes it is really nice to have friends...I hope for the best for both of you. James |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
hoot_owl, dsnyder, James - thanks for taking time to comment, much appreciated. Angie - no, a different one! I'll mail you more information!! RuffRyder - LOL, dogs aren't really ignored! Terribly spoilt in fact!! Glad you liked it. All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins. |
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