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Open Poetry #6

Priceless as Trust

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2000-03-01 05:23 PM

Priceless as Trust

This heart that is
priceless as trust

has pages that
press fragile

with weight
heavy with your evasion.

Open this book
the words scream

read lines
of angry tear.

My flutter of patience
is rupturing

for burning
with your blossoms.

I not tethered
will ash and fly

turn on winged
rainbow truth

will love in starlight
and dance each dance

while you loose face
in this hollow meaning

and the one you hurt
is you.

RufffRyder
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since 2000-02-25

Posts 143
<------Over There------>

1 posted 2000-03-01 05:35 PM

Very nice read Martie.
I can feel your emotions thru the writing.
Thank you for the read

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

2 posted 2000-03-01 08:40 PM

Martie, I liked the format of this piece, and the message.

Parker

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-03-01 08:48 PM

Martie~
You've captured a message
replete with wisdom.
I just love the formatting
that goes on in your mind.
~*Marge*

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2000-03-02 09:27 AM

Evasion is never the answer... it's just the desert wind that sucks the life from hope. This is beautiful, Martie... and touched me deeply.

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

5 posted 2000-09-16 08:14 PM

as priceless as trust is so too is it's fragility - as you know so well -
beautifully written Martie

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