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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-03-01 12:37 PM

The green Pacific
goes gray with gathering clouds -
heralds this night's storm.

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

1 posted 2000-03-01 12:39 PM

Don't know much about haiku, but I'll not argue with an image that speaks volumes in a mere three lines. Powerful ...

--Kess

Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...

--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

2 posted 2000-03-01 02:18 PM

Beki-Beautiful imagery.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 2000-03-01 02:20 PM

Thanks Kess. I am something of an expert on this form, would be glad to email you about it

Gemini you snuck in while I was posting to kess LOL thanks for reading

[This message has been edited by Beki (edited 03-01-2000).]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-03-02 10:48 AM

Beki, your haikus are always wonderful! More, More!!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-03-02 12:44 PM

Beki....your haiku always astounds me

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

6 posted 2000-03-02 12:59 PM

I rarely see any Haiku poems in here, but I certainly will be looking for it!

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2000-03-02 03:12 PM

Beki, I haven't done any haiku since grade 8, so I will post some today. I don't fully understand the point of haiku but anyway.... I like yours.

Parker

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