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From A Little Distance!
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From A Little Distance! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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From A Little Distance! From a little distance Our eyes meet,I try To contain the excitement From within. From a little distance I adore you! I want you! But it's not enough to Make it through the day. This glass wall Beholds the lust! The mist of Passionate breath! The prints of Sweated palms! The stare of Hungry eyes The tremble of Quivering thighs And My desperate sighs! Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent expression of feelings here, I enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Whoa! Was this poem supposed to have THAT kind of affect on me? LOL! This is great...neat how words can just speak so clearly of a moment, of a feeling. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Yikes!! (Good writing!)  ~ Claire |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...just standing back a bit and appreciating this wonderful, passionate piece |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey, your steaming up my computer screen...enjoyed the poem. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sweaty palms on the glass eh DA? haha, good line, passionate poem my friend  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Seems the distance is not close enough! Good poem...now I need some ice water!  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Passion indeed my friend - wow!! K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~  Well ..... maybe it's really  Got my lights flashing ....  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like this very much. James |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Careful sweetheart, those flames can get mighty hot.. HUSG I dropped a tear in the ocean when it is found, I will stop loving you... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lost Dreamer, thanks for your lovely comment and thanks for taking the time to read. ------------------- JF,so glad you enjoyed it hehe Thank you! ------------------- Meadowmuse, YIKES!!! Loved your reply, thank you!! ------------------- Ruth Honey, thanks so much for your lovely reply! ------------------- Martie, hehehe that makes you and me both thanks for your lovely reply. ------------------- Hey Angel girl!!! yup sweaty hands on the glass gives me more cleaning to do!! hehe Thanks honey! ------------------- Ya got it Sharon! thanks for your lovely reply! ------------------- Sweet Butterfly, glad you enjoyed! thank you!------------------- Marge, it is cool and it's definately HOT! and it has my lights flashing too!!! Thanks for your very KEWL!! reply! ------------------- James, glad you liked!! thank you. ------------------- RianbowGirl, yeah they can get mighty hot, but it's fun putting them out *G* Thanks Gorgeous!! < !signature-->What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is fabulous, a most enjoyable piece from a little distance I see you from afar you're that never ending light forming that bright new star from a little distance do you see me to making a little difference, helping our live's to renew Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very passionate! Great writing, DA!! Denise |
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