Open Poetry #6 |
i am a woman |
4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i am a woman i have the hips and the waist i have the infamous hourglass figure i have breasts and all the rest i am a woman i may not be built like a supermodel i'm not obese or fat but i do have bumps and lumps i am a woman my face is not that of a porcelin dolls but it is uniquely mine my smile extends a mile i am a woman i'm not the most attractive but i am the most fortunate i have found above all.....love |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
4eva~nice job here. Im going to take a wild guess here ok? Your a woman right Just kiddin. Thank you for the read |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If you have love, you have everything. Not much more one could ask for. Michael |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Blessed are those who find love and keep it! Welcome to Passions, 4eva...I bet you're gonna love it here! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Creative poem, it was the title that caught my eye which led me to read your poem. I am happy that you have found love, once you have that everything falls into place. The many feelings expressed in your poem is what many women feel, which draws your read in more. I related to your poem very much so. I look forward to reading more pieces by you. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~4Eva~ Excellent!! *Cheering* I gotta agree with Melissa on this one...the title is what originally caught my eye. Had me intrigued. The piece itself is wonderful. Thanks so much for reminding me how good it is to be a woman. I am so happy you have love in your life. take care and god bless. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice piece. I liked your expression and the confidence that came out. I was caught by the title as well. Good work. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A woman with love is rich indeed. |
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Miss.Queeny Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 22 |
' I have lips, hips, tits...I am the power of a woman. I know exactly who I am, what I am, and the wrath I bring. ' 4eva...good poem, I completely agree. Well done. Love, Peace and Apathy...MISS.Q xxx |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
very grrovy poem 4eva. I like it alot. ~AF~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've got love? Hang on to it Good poem Liz |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
You are woman, hear you roar. Great poem. Parker |
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