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| Open Poetry #6 |
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She Haunts Me |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Why can’t I seem to describe her When her vision controls my every thought There seems to be no words worthy Of her, whom I found but never sought I wonder if she even sees me When she sees me everyday Is this really who I am with her If not, what could I possibly say To tell her, only to tell her That she brings me joy in my life With her sweet voice and knowing smile Wild and free spirit, nature’s wife She haunts me because I cannot have her If only she knew that I loved her |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ maybe you should tell her..... this is so beautiful.  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Why can’t I seem to describe her When her vision controls my every thought There seems to be no words worthy Of her, whom I found but never sought... when I saw the title I was afraid this one was about me LOL oh no then it would have been "she stalks me"...  anyway... you know I love these beautiful, sweet love poems... give this to her...then she will know!! stalking on....JM You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name And know my love and my desperation were one and the same... Baby it's alright... Take this pain and all this sadness It's alright Take this rain You're going to be free... Jackson Browne *I love you baby* |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Ahh....but you know JM, that this was written a long, long time ago in a galxy far, far away. LOL And back then, i kept my distance, wrapped in shyness. |
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KathieO Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 14Canada |
Very good stuff!! Not sure if it was "Her" that was haunting you...or your internal conflict about actually telling her. I enjoyed this one. Kathie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
JML...so hauntingly sad  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
JML, This is beautiful, as always... |
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