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The Ascent Of Love
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The Ascent Of Love |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Raging like the untamed wind, Passion's tempest rises, Soaring on the river's path, Boundless love is flying. Feathered upon our spirits, Burning within our souls, Brushed within our skies, Such vivid grandeur flows. Drifting like melancholy words, Contentment softly soothes, Falling to the emerald banks, The pulse of love does move. Hushed within our hearts, Blanketed upon our dreams, Whispered upon our wishes, Our cherished love does gleam. Blossoming like a spicy rose, Emotion floods the air, Expanding into the heavens, Love grows with tender care. Present within our touch, Visible within our eyes, Knowing that for each other, Each of us would die. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful poem you've written here Krista! Such a smooth piece and you can feel the love that you have for that lucky man of yours. Great poem Krista, I really enjoyed it  A writer's soul is on paper etched. In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Alwye, This is a very beautiful and wonderfully written poem, thank you for sharing it. Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Magnificent writing, as always, Krista! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful poem Krista! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
As stated in the last verse Present within our touch, Visible within our eyes, Knowing that for each other, Each of us would die. No greater gift than to give ones life for another. Nice writing There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ You speak volumes from your heart. Exquisite. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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paulsm Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 48 |
Wow, what feeling, well done ! Paul |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much! *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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