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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Smiling brown eyes husky tones tantalize my ears haunt me own me My fingers yearn to touch you my tongue taste you Smell your scent hot and alive when you love me Smiles of pleasure hands entangled in my hair pulling me closer Lips upon my skin lips upon mine Baby I'm going crazy distance the enemy killing me slowly My heart far away with you where it belongs When will I be? Will I be at all? Miles and miles away from my desire Can I do this? Oh lord I love you Time passing always passing agonizing moments empty of you... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~wow should i be reading this? lol...felt like i stepped into a romance novel...this was very moving. loved it. thanks for sharing. amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Deep in thought...I too know these feelings well. Excellent There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Breathe! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is excellently expressed...very well written, its nice to see honest sensuality included in these emotions. When we miss someone desperatly...we miss everything about them, even their "scent" i relate to this one! take care, janet marie You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name And know my love and my desperation were one and the same... And where our footprints used to be There'll be nothing but the sea And the tide and the wind and the open sky And the unbroken horizon... Baby it's alright... Take this pain and all this sadness It's alright Take this rain You're going to be free... Jackson Browne *I love you baby* |
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