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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Change can come on tiptoe love is where it starts It resides often hides deep within our hearts Just as pebbles make a mountain raindrops make a sea one day at a time is how it will always be Ordinary miracles happen all around by giving and receiving comes belonging and believing Every sun that rises never rose before each new day leads the way through a different door We can all be quiet heroes living quiet days walking through the world changing it in quiet ways Ordinary miracles like candles in the dark each and every one of us lights a unique spark The walls can tumble as mountains we will move winds and tide can turn strength of love is proof One for every star lightning bolt or thunder endless possibilities bringing joy and sense of wonder Hope can spring eternally as a miracle multiplies give it and it grows right before our eyes Rainbow arcs across the sky as sun radiates with pleasure release of rain equals pain love knows no other measure... Live in my heart and pay no rent... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, my! This is truly wonderful! Your best yet! I can think of no superlatives good enough for this. Bravo!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW! This is great, Cindy. "Every sun that rises never rose before...." Wonderful words here. I know for sure there is no other Rainbow like the one we have here!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~rainbow wow, this was beautiful. thanks so much for sharing this. this was exactly what i needed to read this evening. its been a long and stressful day, and this really hit the spot. you have a unique way of words and sending a message...touches the soul. thanks again amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, my ! RainbowGirl~ Your muses worked you overtime on this one. Oh, my ! 'Every sun that rises never rose before each new day leads the way through a different door' Each and every verse ... sheer beauty. You've captured perfection. It is the best of the best. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see your heart smiling, RG... |
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Manchester Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 15 |
Bravo! When I read this, I hear a soothing voice whispering the words to me. Poems that calm me like this come just rarely as sleep to me. *claps hands* ----------<--@ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Cindy! I love it!! Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Loved these lines.... Rainbow arcs across the sky as sun radiates with pleasure release of rain equals pain love knows no other measure... Great Job There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Cindy, this is beautiful, loved every line!! Well Done! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
wow ! ... you've outdone yourself Rainbow ... this is a masterpiece ... ps : when I saw the title I thought the whole poem would be in French ...  Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment, Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is gorgeous Rainbow .... I agree with all above .... I love this piece !!!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Cindy, Each verse is a jewel, a poem unto itself, a universal truth. It makes me wonder what inspires one to write so beautiful a verse at any given moment. This just seems to pour so readily from your heart. Wonderful, Cindy Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written many lovely poems... but this one is in a class by itself... truly beautiful... and very reflective of the author. *S* Wonderfully well done, RG! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, I believe this to be amoung your best ever...wonderful job |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RG~ Wow! This is beautiful. Very gentle, I love it! -SEA |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
How do you do it beautiful words.I agree with all your friends.......well done. I love it |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I hope you're not tired of WOW!, but there it is...wonderful poem Cindy--every line! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bless you all.. Liz asked what the thoughts were behind it well it was thinking about all the special people in my life and the different strengths they give me, the encouragement and their time but most importantly - their love.. HUGS all Live in my heart and pay no rent... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wonderful rainbow, from beginning to the end...great writing |
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