Open Poetry #6 |
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Brave New Love |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Brave New Love Brave New Love You begin here Upon these vacant fields of diminished fear The battle is won so feel at ease to roam this trampled land of former tragedies Old grave Fear did fight well but his army pampered in gear with Terror fell Your sword plunged like great Excaliber into your adversaries' chests with cut-steel valor The sheathed ghost of the past exploit was at the front so foremost and viciously destroyed Lavished beyond moist in invisible blood your sword of courage did hoist him out of the void Now errant Love like a lost knight Your quest a mystery made of to sally into tonight By a new star a damsel true will be steep in passion soon for the reborn you [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-28-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poeminister, This was very wonderfully put I understand this poem very well, thank you for the read. Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Poeminister! Beautiful! Denise |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
EXCELLENT! Now if I could only get all this heavy armor off I could spend some time cleaning up me castle. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Enjoyed his poem very much, very creative writing, and excellent Liz |
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