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An Angel On Earth
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An Angel On Earth |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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An Angel on Earth Looking out into the vast black sky One by one they appear like diamonds on a black satin sheet Stars... They sparkle above us, as if to say...you are not alone In the darkness, I hear the sound of your voice A warm breeze flows all around me putting me at peace Time is supsended, the Earth stands still But it's only my imagination, a illusion of my mind For you are not there, just images replaying of a former time Then I once again look up into the heavens A ray of light decends upon me, and I am surrounded by its brightness And there you are, a beautiful angel with wings of gold I look again, but you are gone Was it reality or was it just my mind playing tricks on me? ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HI AMY  this is beautiful...a lovely vision of the stars...and they are twinkling at us...our loved ones winking(smile)JM ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Amy it does not matter whether it is our imagination or not as long as it makes us feel at ease and gives us hope that our loved one's are looking down on us and guiding us. I like to believe thay are each and everyone of them the bright stars in the night....lovely poem  tracie. Sweet name you have to, my daughters name is Amy  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Janet Marie You are so sweet! Thank you for your kind words...so glad you "got" my poem lol. And yes I too like to think of our loved ones as the stars in the sky twinkling down above us. Amy ~Tracie Thank you for your response as well! What a lovely name your daughter has *laughs*. All joking aside thanks for reading and responding.. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ I love this. I also believe in the ~spirit~ of the stars. If it's your imagination .... then mine joins yours ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Aimster, your starry vision bathes the reader in a serene and quiet aire. Very nice. Claire |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exceptional poem. Lovely imagery, Amy. I felt as if I was right next to you seeing this. No, it wasn't your imagination. Michael |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~marge, thank you for your kind words....yes the imagination is the keeper of the souls, at least that's what I think. ~claire glad you liked the poem. i look forward to reading your work some more as well. ~michael, wow i am touched! thank you ever so much for your comments. i am glad that you "saw" the angel as well. your poetry is an inspiration to us all!  Much hugs and kisses to you ALL... Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Lovely poem you have created The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It was real....wonderful images here Amy! |
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