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paulsm
Junior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 48

0 posted 2000-02-26 06:28 PM

RAIN

The rain comes falling softly,
From a dark and troubled sky,
It rumbles discontented,
With howling winds that sigh.

The birds sit All at rest,
The trees do bow and sway,
The rabbits underground,
As the storm does have it's way.

Tomorrow holds the freshness,
Of a newly fallen rain,
The air becomes so sweet,
And the land is new again.

The sparkling of the dew,
And the coolness of the air,
The crispness of the sunlight,
Through the misty morning air.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-02-26 07:02 PM

Lovely images of rain here..wish I had some right now!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2000-02-26 07:16 PM

Another nice poem!!!!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-02-26 08:41 PM

Paulsm~
I love the rain and you've given
it lots of image in this writing.
Nice job and welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-26 08:45 PM

very nice work..perfect images...I could feel the storm coming in...and it really raining here where i am...WELCOME to Passions.
take care, janet marie

...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

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I love you, always.*

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-02-26 09:13 PM

great poem...Oh how I wish of a little rain, I live in Victoria in Australia and we are having our driest summer in a long time and need some relief, Oh the poor old farmer (now there's a thought for a post)

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2000-02-26 10:50 PM

So beautiful....I love the rain. We had our first rain since last year last night, and I savored every moment. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2000-02-27 01:19 AM

Oh, I love the rain. Possibly the only thing I love more in the morning air after a stormy night. Lovely imagery, here. Good poem.

michael

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