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Justin Spire
Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13


0 posted 2000-02-25 10:55 PM


Nurse Crachet's Gone

Nurse Crachet's gone
there was a note
Said she's off
to Oregon.

It said she's sorry
for everything,
gonna meet
with a quarry.

She said it was nice
while it lasted
but she failed
a paradise.

She thanks us all
for being here
says she had
a ball.

She sends her love
to Juliet
she felt you were
a step above.

The rest of you
she blows a kiss
say's she's gonna
slow barbeque


[This message has been edited by Justin Spire (edited 02-25-2000).]

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Lady in Red
Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147

1 posted 2000-02-26 01:58 PM


Justin Spire ! My mother has left ?
To meet with a quarry she said ?
What's this ? A personal note, thank you !
I wonder what she means with "slow BBQ"

Justin Nuendo
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86
Ozzz
2 posted 2000-02-27 03:09 PM


Oh dear, what happened here ?
Nurse Crachet's gone I fear
Now we can have a swell time
Without her banging her head every rhyme !  

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