Open Poetry #6 |
Thank You |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you for the time you spent Thank you for the love you sent Thank you for showing me what was true And thank you especially for being you G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This is simple..yet elegant nonetheless. Those two word "Thank You" may sound like nothing much of all..but they can truly change someone's life. Very good poem. I really enjoyed it! Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I like the "sound" of this verse. Saying it aloud sounds musical...is it part of a song? A simplistic theme, "thank you" can mean so much and so many different things to us. Claire |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A very sweet verse...and a thank-you to you Tracie |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
And a "THANK YOU" goes out to all of you. I've thought many times of extending this but haven't been able to come up with the words. I wrote this for somebody who was very special to me at the time a while ago and felt like it said everything that I wanted it to say. Who knows, maybe one day I'll add to it. Thanks again. G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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