Open Poetry #5 |
Yours Forever |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Young dreams I had , Young love I've inside, As I imagined I wa yours, And you were mine, As I was in your arms, Weak in the knees , Gentle breeze comes along, So shy to answer the question you asked, The feeling was so good , As I lost my heart to you, There in lyning your arms, Feeling warm inside, Beautiful day, today, The time runs by, We said goodbye , Left our secret place, Far behind , Left our hearts behind, I lay in bed all night, And I was thinking about the love we had, I was yours forever, And you were my own love |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Vandana! Brought back memories! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hi, since I'm new to Passions, I'm doing my homework and going back to read poetry submitted before coming aboard. "Yours Forever" touched a nerve, because there was a secret place, now,in the shadows of my memory, where passions flowed, and would best be described by one of Hoot's eloquent poems. Nicely done. DH |
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