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Heartfelt thoughts (Echo gave me the feelings to write this)
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Heartfelt thoughts (Echo gave me the feelings to write this) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Heartfelt thoughts My heart has been hard and sad and this same heart has been soft and glad. My hearts been with me thru all my sorrow all my joy and passionate pleasure and within reside the hopes and the dreams that I treasure. Together we've shared some lonely heartaches and also felt the sadness of many a heartbreak. My heartfelt thoughts today are quite clear they're special feelings that I hold near and dear. My heart desires to replace my sorrow with joy and happiness, to fill my emptiness with some warm tenderness, and my loneliness could use a sweetly done caress, a kiss and an intimate embrace no less. I know my heart would Love all this loveliness. Only one more heartfelt desire remains for this heart of mine and that is to Love and Cherish another until the end of time. Jameslee@jan12,2000@forEcho "Come what sorrow can, it cannot countervail the exchange of joy that one short moment gives me in her sight". Romeo and Juliet "Yes, half of life, its most wonderful half, is hidden from the man who has never loved passionately." Extract from Salviati's diary [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Heartfelt, indeed, James. This speaks so true for most every heart, I would say. May god bless Echo and you, too, for thinking of her. Beautiful poem. Michael |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is sweet, a wonderful poem  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely and sweet, James! I'm sure she'll love it! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Michael and Whiskey and Denise for the nice comments about my poem. I wrote this because after I had read Echo's poem titled "Hearts" I began to think once again about some ponderings that have recently been making themselves known inside my own heart. I think that Love is like a river and Love is always there but it requires a softening of ones heart to experience that flow. I have been experiencing this softening of my heart recently and it is a blessing. James |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
James, I am glad you said something in my last poem about this, cause I had no idea. I am glad I was able to inspire you to write something so wonderful and beautiful as this. You have said so much in this poem and so wonderfully too! I will miss the greatness of your poetry while I am gone. Take care of yourself ok?!?! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wow, Echo you made me feel really good with your nice compliments. Have a safe and wonderful journey and check back with us when your heart whispers softly to you...Hey Echo, its time to visit your friends in Passion. Take care, James |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was very touching! She has a way with inspiring! Well done! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
SUch feelings expressed in this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you WhtDove and hoot_owl I appreciate your comments. Yes she really touched my heart and inspired these feelings. James |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Back to the top...these are lovely thoughts, I'm sure Echo appreciates them all!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
James, Very lovely poem, heartwarming to think that Echo inspired this, but she does inspire, and her poetry is wonderful, and so is yours. Enjoyed this very much Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you PoetdeVine and Liz for your lovely comments...I am overwhelmed by all of the wonderful responses. James |
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