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cougaryouth
Junior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 25

0 posted 2000-01-13 08:53 AM

Anxiety is high
                                                  doubts are set
                                                  what ifs have been thought
                                                  but still you are shy

                                                  Decisions are made
                                                  fellings are hurt
                                                  insults are said
                                                  and paths have been laid

                                                  And time rolls on
                                                  and you learn new things
                                                  your body gets older
                                                  and you lose romance
                                                  but you gain new freinds
                                                  and your mind gets wiser
                                                  it goes so fast
                                                  but time rolls on

                                                  you meet the one
                                                  but you hesitate
                                                  and after sometime
                                                  you know shes the one
                                                  you face new problems
                                                  and you think you should run
                                                  but you stick around because the world scares you
                                                  to live all alone
                                                  without the ones you love

                                                  And time rolls on
                                                  and you learn new things
                                                  your body gets older
                                                  and you lose romance
                                                  but you gain new freinds
                                                  and your mind gets wiser
                                                  it goes so fast
                                                  but time rolls on

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-01-13 08:58 AM

Indeed, hesitation is never good - but then neither is "settling" just because you don't wish to be alone. How do you win? Wise words.

Michael

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 2000-01-13 08:02 PM

I agree with Michael, this is a wonderful poem! Hope to see more from you

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2000-01-13 08:22 PM

I love your poem, it has lots of meaning to it. Great job!

Nathan

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-01-13 09:50 PM

...and so is the cycle of life, cougaryouth...

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