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Fragile
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
Often, inevitable , as it might seems. The beaten path, what we choose to trod. Sometimes, out of fear of change. It is also helplessness at times. The neon sign, writings on the wall. Nothing deter, a single minded pursuer. Perseverance, Sacrifices, Commitments. In the end, what matter is the memory. Misty eyed and clouded rationality. This vow to win the only one favor. Sentimental, irrational, emotional. Fragile as it is, mighty is the heart! Rejoice, for in tomorrow is a promise. The sun surely will rise again. Once more, freedom is just a breath away. And life goes on, the way it has always been. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'Rejoice, for in tomorrow is a promise' Such a beautiful line! Very lovely! Denise |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
Denise: Thanks and am glad u like the poem  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Much to think about in this one...enjoyed the read!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yep - the heart takes more blows than any other part of the body - for sure. MIGHTY, indeed. Good poem. Michael |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
devina: yes indeed, lots to think about, thats what one sided love affair sometime does to a man! michael: glad you liked the poem, and yes, mighty is the heart..... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jake - This is very well written. I like the line: 'Fragile as it is, mighty is the heart! ' Wow ! Mighty indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Neithem, this is great certainly something to think about , WOnderful poem |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I needed to read something like this, thank you. Exellent work. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
Thanks everyone for your much needed encouragements! Marge: I am glad u liked this one. Whiskey: I was afraid u might not read this...but I guess u does not normally dissappoint others Alwaye: Am happy u found this good reading... |
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