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Keeping It Simple |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Keeping It Simple… That tenacious tingle of your touch the one that pleases me so much; that silvery shiver up my spine when in your arms I am entwined; that calming sapphire-eyed gaze, lifts me from the deepest haze; and your voice of deepest measure claims me as your very treasure. There are so many signs of why I fell in love with you but inwardly it’s because you said the words “I do.” 12 January, 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
AWWWWW!! Sunshine this so beautiful and so elegantly simple. I like it much!!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Elegantly simple yes I think it's true But I also think that this man was specially made for you. Very nice poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WildChild, thank you; and Helmut, sometimes we are soul mates, and at all times, best friends... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
"that silvery shiver up my spine" I always wondered how to put that feeling in words...now I know  Very beautiful feelings here Sunshine...and written beautifully..< !signature--> A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-12-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pepper, you may use any words of mine, at anytime, anywhere. But watch out - they could cause some romantic moments... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, I agree! This is so very beautiful, Sunshine! Denise |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you denise...it is easy when you have true love... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Simplicity never said so much. Beautiful poem, Sunshine. What a feeling of love this one displays. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Michael, for your words of encouragement... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a love poem! Yes! I love this! You should write more about him. |
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