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Open Poetry #5

Can You See Me?

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

0 posted 2000-01-12 07:19 AM

Can you see me from heaven?
Do you see me cry?
Do you know how I feel,
How I want to die?

I feel so alone
On this Vast Earth.
Why am I here,
And what is my life worth.

Do I touch others
In this desolate place?
Do they know my name?
Do they see my face?

Can you see me from heaven?
Do you see me cry?
Do you know how I feel,
How I want to die?

This mask, this charade,
This lie that I live,
It is not me.
It's just what people see.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-01-12 07:23 AM

Angel Girl-
Very nicely done...
somehow I got the wrong poem
to post to.
Anyway ......
nice, very nice.
~*Marge*~

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-12-2000).]

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2000-01-12 07:37 AM

Wow, very powerful poem, angelgirl. I can really relate to this poem well. ((HUGS))

Michael

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

3 posted 2000-01-12 08:43 AM

Wonderful,a little sad,
I can't see your face
but I just saw your heart
and your very beautiful
Angel Girl.

earthman

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

4 posted 2000-01-13 02:32 PM

Thank you all very much. Your comments mean a lot to me.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-01-13 06:39 PM

I've said these very same things, Angel Girl. Very powerful, full of genuine emotion.

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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