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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Escape! Locked up in this cage trying to fight my painful rage I am Suffering and wilting slowly dying and clinging to a possibility of hope That My soul will soon set itself free from this cage which beholds the unknown page For I pray the strength to Escape and unbind, to free my soul of this undecided mind. Dark Angel [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-11-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my...this one speaks to me in volumes. I have lived in that cage, know all those feelings, those emotions you express....well written!! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
WOW DA!!!!!!! Very powerful poem - I can relate to this a lot. Very well written. Is everything OK? You know you can talk to me if you need to - call me. I hope that you're OK. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Different than your other work, equally as good though..and very powerful! I like!  |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
You WILL escape Dark Angel, BECAUSE you pray. I also have been where you are! I am praying with you! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Dark Angel, your reference to writing as a means of release is subtle but plainly perceptible here. Strong poetic texture, nicely written.  Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This speakes volumes to me as well! Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ruth, PdV, Bbuzz, meadowmuse and Denise. thank you all very much for your kind replies  ------------- Moonshine, everything is OK! thanks so much for your lovely reply. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Dreamer_556 Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 34 |
That made quite an impact with me! Loved it ~*Dreamer*~ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I rather like the flow and format of this piece, like steps it is. Like this I do . Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dreamer, thanks so much, glad you loved it!!  -------------- Soul- Brother, thank you, I always appreciate your comments! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: Big hugs sweetheart Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
RG, Thanks hon!!!! big hugs back at ya What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A girl of many talents, you are. Beautifully written Liz |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Don't you relize you hold the key to unlock the cage? Look inside yourself and you will find it. very moving piece |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow! Great poem. Indecision can be the hardest escape in the world. I think you gotta be a modern day Hudini to pull it off...LOL I wallow in indecision everyday of my life it seems. Let me know if you figure it out. Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, thank you for the lovely compliment, but wish I was a girl of many talents Thanks again ------------------- Kitkat, yes I do know, but I keep fumbling it. thank you! ------------------- Michael, thanks so much for your lovely comment, I will definatley let you know! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
WOW hon this is wonderfully done! I can relate so well to it, too. Brilliant writing It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Caroline thanks so much for your lovely and kind reply, my dear friend!! *hugs* to you! drink plenty of orange Juice!! ok! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is a solid piece of work M, it does flow well - it does indeed. The end fits the beginning well - in sound and content. Well done! K |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I certainly did miss some of your best work here! This is fantastic DA!!!!! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Awesome poem! Especially loved the last stanza! Corinne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can really relate to this one right now in my life |
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