Open Poetry #5 |
Orion |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hunter of the stars Protector of the skies The ebb and flow of countless galaxies Have passed before your eyes. What they must have seen! The birth of stars The passing of comets The beginnings of creation The ends of the universe. You stand in the sky A silent sentinel Sword at the ready With so many tales to tell. ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
My favorite of all the constilations you have depicted well my friend. Good poem. Michael |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
From a confirmed star gazer, well done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Good job enjoyed the read. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Sven |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And what must it think of we, the small wanderers? Excellent poem, Sven. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The stars do pretty much put everything in perspective, don't they?... Nice job, Sven... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'Heavenly'! I enjoyed this very much, Sven! Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Who has been looking to the heavens lately? Two starry poems written by a star that shines bright in the sky for us all. Bravo Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven - Absolutely wonderful. Taking me far into the evening sky ... mesmerizing. ~*Marge*~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I love the stars. Orion is one of my favorite sights of the winter sky....Well done Drive it like you stole it...LOL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, this is wonderful, Orion, is my favourite Constellation!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sven, This is wonderful, one of my favorites. I love the stars Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Can't help but be a bit of a star gazer myself!! Very nice, Sven. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Yes, Isis. . . I have been looking into the stars a lot lately. . . perhaps soon, I'll tell you what I've seen. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
In the early winter evenings, Orion seems to almost touch the top of my old home... It was the first constellation I learned to recognize... and it's still one of the first things I look for if I drive up to my Dad's after dark. *S* I like this much, Sven... it brought back a lot of memories of some of those tales Orion could tell! *G* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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