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The m&m Heart |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My heart is like an M&M A hard shell cover outside The sweetness in the middle Is all the shell will hide I will not melt in your mouth Nor in your hand I fear This candy will not be devoured Not by just anyone here Looks may be deceiving And you may want to enter But remember, there just may be A peanut at the center Crispy may not be in my soul Nor nuts be upon my heart But once you feel the love I have You can’t stop once you start! |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
My kind of poem. I love it! Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
What a sweet poem... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine - Absolutely adorable ! I can just see that little M&M dancing around. Adorable ! ~*Marge*~ |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
MM-MM.... GOOD!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ROFL...instead of typing RainbowGirl I typed RainbowHeart....oh my!!!...No wonder it wouldn't let me in..*g* No nuts upon you heart...hmmmmmmmmm, OK, if you say so...oooops...*g* You are something else!...M@M Special is my rating! HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So sweet PdV...I love it!  A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PoetdeVine, Cute, funny and well done. You are one of my favorites. *L* Sy |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! So cute, so sweet!...mmmmmmmm good!  Denise |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
But the question remains... is your heart green or red? Perhaps the new color blue? I doubt it would be anything so drab as brown. Well, what ever the color, it has been a most enjoyable treat my sweet Lady DeVine. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, PDV, I'm sorry...couldn't answer any quicker You know your poetry always makes me giggle so and SNICKER Since I'm an M&M in fact, it seems I have the grounds To offer you my sweetness if you offer me your MOUNDS!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Cute - cute - cute And there's Nan again, showing off with her graphics. How does she do it? This poem is precious Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really like this |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved this, so cute! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Excellent my dear friend! And whomever enters that wonderful heart of yours will never regret it!  <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind replies! (Balladeer if you touch my Mounds I'll Tootsie Pop you so hard you'll need a Candy Cane!LOL). Elizabeth, the graphic that Nan used was designed by ME!!!! And you can't imagine how hard it was to press those M&M's onto the page! Rebecca...I don't think we have to worry about that! No one's getting past that hard candy shell remember!  |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great poem!!! I loved it ;-) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I just love M&Ms.....Yummy Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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Jim Hastings Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 23Arizona |
Wonderfull poem, I understand most everybody likes M&M's It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
LOL@Balladeer and Devine, you two are TOO much...Cute poem...now you've got me thinking about food though...G* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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