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Like a rainbow in the sky
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Like a rainbow in the sky |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
Like a rainbow in the sky So many colors,so many races So many places and diffrent faces Like a rainbow in the sky each color stands out with pride Even though we're made of diffrent colors We mix together and make a new color When the rainbow appears I take a minute to see The many diffrent colors that shines upon me No matter how you look at it You never seem to find Where the rainbow ends or where it starts to combine People are like rainbows made of diffrent colors Everyone is diffrent compared to all others |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I love your poem! It's well-written and truthful. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
We can all take a lesson from the rainbow, can't we?! Great poem! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Well now, I couldn't let this one go by without a comment..*g* Excellent, but then I would say that, wouldn't I?...ooops...but seriously..Rainbows are very special...  HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely sentiments - and ones that would change the world if they could be recognised by all - well done. '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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