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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-01-09 08:18 AM


        Soul in light

She stood in a summers morn,
Motionless, just after dawn.
Where gentle light painted round,
Dancing shadows on the ground.

Beautiful, her head held high,
Eyes searching the woods and sky.
A picture of grandeurs dwell,
Only its breath broke the spell.

It lives within my reminisce,
Like vapors of a loving kiss.
Lingers, my conscious brain,
Now with other treasures lain

Beauty grows in fragile plumbs,
Only when the mind succumbs.
I pray your mind be germane,
To treasures, in your domain.

Where e'er lies beauty in your sight,
There lies the mist of soul in light.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-01-09 08:40 AM


Seymour -

Lovely.  
On the forest edge I could see,
nature looking back at me.
~Marge~

whiskey
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2 posted 2000-01-09 08:41 AM


Sy,
You keep rolling all these beautiful poems of your tongue your so very talented and a big romantic   Shes a very lucky lady

Julie

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-01-09 09:18 AM


Lovely  
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-01-09 09:46 AM


Sy
How do you do it, poet friend
That forest mist pours from your pen
And spirit's aura casts a light
On early morning's dancing sprite
And all botanic life then breathes
The very words your poetry leaves
And I am left with lullabies
And early morning misty eyes
Exquisite
Liz

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-09-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-01-09 11:44 AM


Marge,
Then you are blessed. *L* Sy
Whiskey,
Romantic I may be
But anyone can see,
The beauty I see. *L*
Hoot,
Thank you hoot and have a lovely day. *L*
Elizabeth,
We live the future, stand in the past.
Ever in fear, ever in cast.
People are people, no matter the coup.
They are, what they are, subject to.
Love Sy

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2000-01-09 11:54 AM


Sy,
I am what I am, suject to
The art and the poetry of you
And the song of the spirit writes the word
The echoing song that it has heard
From hillside forest to little stream
I see the phantom seem of seem
Liz

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-09-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2000-01-09 01:03 PM


Elizabeth,
Your beautiful answer has made me say.
That you have now, made my day.
Love Sy

Severn
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8 posted 2000-01-10 07:39 PM


This just gave me such an impression of a doe, standing on the edge of a clearing...wow, this is so gently beautiful, Sy.

K

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9 posted 2000-01-10 08:15 PM


The eyes to see where beauty lies
Is true a gift, I do agree
Such is the beauty, causing *sighs*
Within your treasured poetry!          

Breathtaking, Sy!  

 Denise


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2000-01-10 10:28 PM


Severn,
Your answer is as beautiful as my poem, thank you. *L*
Denise,
Your answers make my heart to twitter
And you are the pick of my litter. *L*

Balladeer
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11 posted 2000-01-10 10:43 PM


Sy, when a poem elicits a flurry of poetic responses, it is truly a poem worth its weight. This one did....and it is. Good work.
RainbowGirl
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12 posted 2000-01-11 08:20 PM


Sy: Beautiful seems so inadequate but it is..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.


Nan
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13 posted 2000-01-11 09:56 PM


Sy, You're using more and more wonderfully effective imagery.... and I'm lovin' it....
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2000-01-11 10:24 PM


RG,
Not at all, a great response and I thank you. *L* Sy
Nan,
Thank you so much Nan, your responses mean alot. *L* Sy

Andrew Scott
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15 posted 2000-01-11 10:34 PM


Definitly Smooooooth! Like this one alot! Especially those last two lines... wraps the whole thing up very nicely. Top shelf material here Sir Tabin. I bow to you and yours.
HelmutB
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16 posted 2000-01-12 06:32 AM


Work is calling here my name
so I have to make short this poet game
Your poem deserves much more than this
But reading it was such a bliss
You got a magic pen up there
Can You buy it anywhere? (lol)
The words you use are so divine
I enjoy it so much...line by line
Forgive the shortness of reply
gotta run now....by Sy

I can tell it was to early for me to reply lol

[This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 01-12-2000).]

caroline
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17 posted 2000-01-12 08:54 AM


Oh Sy...this is magical...your talent for penning peaceful, beautiful verse is awesome, dear!  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



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