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Soul in light
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Soul in light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Soul in light She stood in a summers morn, Motionless, just after dawn. Where gentle light painted round, Dancing shadows on the ground. Beautiful, her head held high, Eyes searching the woods and sky. A picture of grandeurs dwell, Only its breath broke the spell. It lives within my reminisce, Like vapors of a loving kiss. Lingers, my conscious brain, Now with other treasures lain Beauty grows in fragile plumbs, Only when the mind succumbs. I pray your mind be germane, To treasures, in your domain. Where e'er lies beauty in your sight, There lies the mist of soul in light. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - Lovely. On the forest edge I could see, nature looking back at me. ~Marge~ |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Sy, You keep rolling all these beautiful poems of your tongue your so very talented and a big romantic  Shes a very lucky ladyJulie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy How do you do it, poet friend That forest mist pours from your pen And spirit's aura casts a light On early morning's dancing sprite And all botanic life then breathes The very words your poetry leaves And I am left with lullabies And early morning misty eyes Exquisite Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-09-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Then you are blessed. *L* Sy Whiskey, Romantic I may be But anyone can see, The beauty I see. *L* Hoot, Thank you hoot and have a lovely day. *L* Elizabeth, We live the future, stand in the past. Ever in fear, ever in cast. People are people, no matter the coup. They are, what they are, subject to. Love Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I am what I am, suject to The art and the poetry of you And the song of the spirit writes the word The echoing song that it has heard From hillside forest to little stream I see the phantom seem of seem Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-09-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your beautiful answer has made me say. That you have now, made my day. Love Sy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This just gave me such an impression of a doe, standing on the edge of a clearing...wow, this is so gently beautiful, Sy. K |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The eyes to see where beauty lies Is true a gift, I do agree Such is the beauty, causing *sighs* Within your treasured poetry! Breathtaking, Sy!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Your answer is as beautiful as my poem, thank you. *L* Denise, Your answers make my heart to twitter And you are the pick of my litter. *L* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, when a poem elicits a flurry of poetic responses, it is truly a poem worth its weight. This one did....and it is. Good work. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sy: Beautiful seems so inadequate but it is.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy, You're using more and more wonderfully effective imagery.... and I'm lovin' it....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RG, Not at all, a great response and I thank you. *L* Sy Nan, Thank you so much Nan, your responses mean alot. *L* Sy |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Definitly Smooooooth! Like this one alot! Especially those last two lines... wraps the whole thing up very nicely. Top shelf material here Sir Tabin. I bow to you and yours. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Work is calling here my name so I have to make short this poet game Your poem deserves much more than this But reading it was such a bliss You got a magic pen up there Can You buy it anywhere? (lol) The words you use are so divine I enjoy it so much...line by line Forgive the shortness of reply gotta run now....by Sy I can tell it was to early for me to reply lol [This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 01-12-2000).] |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh Sy...this is magical...your talent for penning peaceful, beautiful verse is awesome, dear! It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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