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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 2000-01-09 04:35 AM


Two distant bodies house one single soul.
Each half lives what the other only dreams,
but in each other they find themselves whole.
Life, they have learned, is never what it seems.
Destructive pasts scar in different ways
yet each heart is still capable of love.
Hands bound in friendship through all of their days,
cradle their soul as gently as a dove.
A bond such as this is a gift divine.
It holds at bay terrors stalking the night.
Asleep their ethereal arms entwine
and they know someday life will turn out right.
They - together in life, in pain, and peace,
find within each other longed for release.


©2000 Satiate & DreamEvil



 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)



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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 2000-01-09 08:59 AM


Nice joint effort you two  
Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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Honea Path, SC USA
2 posted 2000-01-09 08:56 PM


Beautiful poem you two.  
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-01-09 08:58 PM


Good collaboration! I like this one...shows what happens when friends put their thoughts together!  

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
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Sitting in Michael's Lap
4 posted 2000-01-09 09:39 PM


"Each half lives what the other only dreams,
but in each other they find themselves whole."

That is the most romantic line I have read in a long time!

Absolutely beautiful -- an excellent poem from two excellent poets.     You two need to do this more often ...


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.


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