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Vaneet Randhawa
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-01-08 08:33 PM



Wishes

Do you ever wish
you could be a star
shining in the sky?
A star so beautiful
and so very high?
Do you ever wish
you could be a river
with water so clear?
A river so very straight
and having no fears?
Do stop wishing, you’ve gone too far
For you are your own self
And you are what you are
Wishes are wishes,
Thoughts are thoughts,
But what is reality
Should never be fought.


© Copyright 2000 Vaneet - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-01-08 09:00 PM


Vaneet-

Very nicely done .... welcome to Passion's
Look forward to reading more.

Please be sure and read some of the other poets and comment on their works also.


~Marge~

whiskey
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2 posted 2000-01-08 09:19 PM


Vaneet,
This is wonderful, I hope to read more of your poems  Welcome to Passions  

Vaneet Randhawa
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 5
California
3 posted 2000-01-08 10:19 PM


Thanx Whiskey!  I look forward to reading more of your great poemz and also writing more of my own.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-01-08 11:34 PM


Welcome to passions family! I look forward to reading more from you! Please check your e-mail!
Paul Hoekman
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5 posted 2000-01-09 12:17 PM


WELCOME
very enjoyable first post,
look forward to many many more.
EARTHMAN
(Paul Hoekman)

Severn
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6 posted 2000-01-09 07:31 AM


Welcome to passions, Vaneet...

    

HelmutB
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7 posted 2000-01-09 09:27 AM


Very nicely done
and Welcome


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 2000-01-09 09:28 AM


Welcome to passions  
Lisa Graham-Marshall
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9 posted 2000-01-09 09:35 AM


"Lovely poem..and welcome"
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