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The ever more of you
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The ever more of you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The ever more of you We are not strangers you and I, There is a covert pregnant tie. A feeling deep within the soul, Like the sensing of a similar goal. I feel we've met before you know, Many times long, long ago. Those times we sort each other out, Even the times of turn about. Today, you show to me this face. But yet much more do I embrace. Within you lies the zeal, appeal, The very unction of the real. It's the weakness of the human will, That make me probe you closer still. I look beyond this face to see And you in turn do that to me. Sometimes a husband or a wife. Sometimes a Venus of a life Perhaps it is the other way. To this I say the eyes see clay. We seek the evermore of true. And this I've found again in you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"look beyond the eyes", so beautiful Sy. What a gift you have dear man. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear Sy, The wonder you create I see This poem of beauteous verse is you But the beauty of the poetry Most certain dwells within the true You are amazing Love ya, Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-06-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is gorgeous Sy.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is so Beautiful Sy, Its wonderful  |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Sy.... you do have a way of touching the very soul. "I look beyond this face to see, and you in turn do that to me" Beautiful my fiend, beautiful. B Gravitt |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, We are all seeking beyond our eyes. *L* Elizabeth, This is a little of what I've been trying to say, there is much more. Love you Sy Pepper, All the secrets of the universe are within us. *L* Sy Whiskey, Thank you my dear, you have a large soul. Betty, Your beauty lies beyond the mirror. thank you Sy |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful..you do indeed possess quite a gift, Sy. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alwaye, You do say the nicest things. *L* sy |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well done, Sy. Now go over and check out Q&A! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"The very unction of the real" This poem, so tender in its offering, makes me smile. How can it not embrace, in dear and emollient phrases, your love's heart and soul?  Claire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Well Sy, we can't ever say you lack for talent dear man! Beautiful! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This made me think of one of my favorite movies,'Somewhere in Time'. So deeply romantic! I think I would have to say this is my favorite of yours, so far! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, looks like I replied a bit late and all the GOOD responses were taken! I will simply respond with the words "touchingly beautiful". Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy - it is so nice to put a face to the name - you look nothing like Oscar!!! LOL This, my friend, is a delight. Expressive, sincere and moving. A gift indeed. K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are romancing the soul again, dear Sy! Thank you! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I'll have to agree with all of the above Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Had lots of fun with the picture, I don't know why but everyone guessed. Thanks for the good on the poem. Meadow, Beautiful words, thank you. Devina, Thanks for the beautiful. Denise, Yes somewhere in time, beautiful. *L* Sy Elizabeth, Thank you for the read and comment. Severn, A beautiful comment, thank you. *L* Sy Sunshine, Romancing the soul is my thing, thank you. *L* Sy |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, indeed, Sy.... 'Tis a phenomenon - how our minds connect here, isn't it?.. I like this one lots.. |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
Your poem was so romantic that it touched my heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Thank you, you are a sweetheart. *L* Sy Quick, My thanks to you for the nice comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delight to read!!! This is beautiful, Seymour... well done! |
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