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Kevin Taylor
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since 1999-12-23
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0 posted 2000-01-06 05:55 PM

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You were 16
When I met you.
(When poetry was still a promise - God, the promises we made!
And made again when we came back to words.)

You were 16
When I met you
And I was 25.



 Kevin
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devina
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1 posted 2000-01-06 06:46 PM

So what's the rest of the story???? Just wondering what your decision was and all....

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doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-01-09 11:27 PM

The first stanza is wonderful... I , too, would like to know the rest of the story! LOL... you definitely have a way of painting a picture with your words and intriguing your audience. Thanks for posting this.
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