Untitled.......( An angry poem.)

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Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

0 posted 2000-01-06 04:47 AM

Have you forgotten me?
And have you moved on?
Did i mean anything at all to you?
Or was I just a bit of fun?
Do you ever think of me now?
As i think of you?
Or is your mind occupied,
With your next naive screw?
Were your sweet words lies?
And were your hugs benign?
When you weren't f*cking me,
Was I just a big waste of time?

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-01-06 04:59 AM

Sounds like you need some answers here...

Angry indeed.

Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

2 posted 2000-01-06 05:38 AM

Thanx for your reply Severn,
Yup you're right - but I got the answers and things are different now : )

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-01-06 07:55 AM

Moonshine, WOW, alot of hate here. I guess I would've felt the same. glad that things are different now

Great poem!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2000-01-06 08:35 AM

Moonshine...I know how ya feel...women do this to me all the time?...Why, it happened over 10 times in the last two weeks?....I've been drinking moonshine ever since?....Nice poem..and I would think most everyone could relate to this....

Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

5 posted 2000-01-06 08:54 AM

Thanx for your comment DA,
NO WAY!!!!!!! Definately not hate - I could never ever hate this person - was just confusion and lack of communication that made me think that way. This person is still in my life and means a lot to me.

Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

6 posted 2000-01-06 08:57 AM

Thanx for your reply Toe - moonshine ever since huh?

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2000-01-06 01:49 PM

Sorry you feel this way moonshine....but I think we all have from time to time

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 2000-01-06 02:00 PM

I liked the short, to-the-point statements in this poem.  It came out as being direct and forceful.  Very nicely written.  I sent a copy to Toerag, and he must have thought you were writing to him because Toerag sent me the answers to all your questions:

Who?
Nope.
Of course you did.
Fun???  Ya think talking 'bout relationships is fun???!!!
Everytime I'm out with old what's-her-name.
Ya think of me?  (perk)
Hey!  Don't go putting down naive women, ya hear?
They were little white lies, so that's OK.  Right?
Benign?  Sweet thang, the way your hooters poked me in the chest, those hugs were NOT benign!
Certainly NOT a waste of time (except after that last time when I knew I wasn't going to get lucky anymore).

I think you need to really tear into that Toerag fella and teach him a lesson.  Whatta ya think?

Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

9 posted 2000-01-06 11:29 PM

Thanx for your reply Hoot,
I don't feel this way anymore. Things have changed a lot since I wrote this poem : )

Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

10 posted 2000-01-06 11:41 PM

Thanx for your reply lngjhnAg,
LOL yeah gonna totally rip into him! Naw - it was a good laugh and I'm not a violent girl lol I think that it was direct and forceful also - I write best when I write with emotion and at the time this is what came out of my pen : )

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